First original song from Bitchfest (what do you think?)

I would appreciate your honest opinion (even if you hate it) about my first original song. I wrote the lyrics and my guitarist, Toby wrote the music to go along with it.

 Click HERE   to hear it  (click on the song ‘YOUNGER MAN’) KEEP in mind this is NOT the final version.. just testing the waters..

 

Here are the lyrics to "Younger Man"  🙂

Younger Man by Dr. Dot and Tob Le Ron

 I’ve been down this road before
 what starts as just fun turns in
 to a love, love that just can’t work

 It’s fun to teach you, it’s fun to teach you
 the wisdom most older gals posses
 an aphrodisiac, an apphrodisiac
 that makes younger men obsess

 So in the end it’s me again,  that will cry
 so to you now I should say goodbye, goodbye
 It twists and turns and it’s starting to burn
 but I wont, but I wont say goodbye
 but I wont, but I wont say goodbye

 The Pro’s of a younger man
 are what makes it so exciting
but i cant turn back the time
turn back the time to make you mine
as you can’t catch with my years (echo)
this love will just result in tears (echo)

c-part:
boy can you hear me sigh? boy, boy can you hear me sigh?

last chorus
So in the end it’s me again,  that will cry
 so to you now I should say goodbye, bye bye
 It twists and turns and it’s starting to burn

but I wont, but I wont say goodbye
but I wont, but I wont say goodbye

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